el Arma Escrita

Hey! I signed up a week or so ago. I decided to just jump into things, rather than introduce myself here first... but, I figured I can afford to back-track! ...

I've tried that before. I don't need it though, I write on my own just fine. I would recommend scheduling your writing, once a day. It accomplishes the same thing, ...

Firstly, I am curious if there is a legitimate reason why a city wouldn't allow anyone to leave its borders. Now, I'm sure if there is one, it has to ...

Thank you all so much for your input! Once again, I appreciate the opinions. I JUST realized that I used the term Chytry in this chapter when you pointed it ...

Thank you both for reading and reviewing! Rubin, I was concerned about Natalia's flatness, my own self. My goal was to try and make her seem mysterious in the first ...

Chapter One Natalia Novotny closed the door on the tea party as she made her way out. She was well aware of what they all said about her. It wasn't ...

Okay, I'll give this story its first critique! Something about her was pleasant, but James had no interest, she may be physically appealing but she was a witch. I feel ...

Overall I liked it - it was an intriguing idea. At the beginning I thought it was going to go a "Neverending Story" route, but you sent it in a ...